The key review thread

[izabella]

Okay I know I should of made this earlier, but hadn't had time to do it. So here it is. You may leave any comment I don't care. In fact since thsi is my first fan fiction please leave constructive criticisum. Well I guess that's it except thanks so much for reading my story in the first place.


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[naturepenny]

naturepenny: it wasn't bad for your first fanfic, sounds intresting, keep with it

naturepenny's friend(sammy): i'm very very confused, try reading it over a couple of times before posting, good luck

(note: u might not want to write in green it's hard to read...)