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Post by naturepenny on Oct 4, 2006 20:03:33 GMT -5
Read it quickly. It's great. more comments latter cause i have to get off the pc...
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Post by Mickey on Oct 8, 2006 13:38:29 GMT -5
i wrote a ton more, and i'm hoping to post it by tomorrow night, once I finish cleaning my room and studying for PSAT & Bio, then I will sit down and complete it. Thats the plan anyways.
Yay! Nature read it!!! Hehe. I'm happy. I've been working really hard on this, and its soo much fun. It qualms my need for Harry Potter nicely.
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Post by naturepenny on Oct 8, 2006 18:04:29 GMT -5
That's nice to hear...I should go back to writing, sorry for the delay...too much stress right now and i started 2 other stories...1 fanfic of hp and the other has nothing to do with captors or hp or anything it's extreamly random. lol. random good!
signed, AND LOGAN so DOES Rock!!!!!! Jess is a close 2nd...but logan is blonde how can u not like him ;P
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Post by Mickey unlogged in on Oct 9, 2006 10:18:01 GMT -5
Jess is totally hotter! He's got that whole secretive reader inside of him, and i can avoid the blond because its cut short to his head, and he's big, and his face... i dunno. I mean, he's not BAD Looking, but Jess is totally hotter. And he's got depth. The rebel bad boy wise @$$ and...
Alright, I'm making a Gilmore Girls thread.
as for But for a single rose, I am on the last page, And i negotiated with the admins to unblock my website!!!! YESSS!!!!!
I feel powerful.
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Post by Mickey on Oct 9, 2006 13:46:16 GMT -5
Hehe <3! I finally updated, yay!! I’m sorry for the delay, stupid homework, but at least I updated it with an Eleven pages! Wahoo!
Here are your theory questions that will point you towards clues, as well as away from clues, and will always point you towards how brilliant I am <3.
1. What might Ginny think of that McGonnagol would disapprove of?
The book was very skinny, with crisp white sheets seemingly begging to be written on. Yet as Ginny stretched a hand t owards it, writing began sprawling across the page.
Ginny jumped back in fright. It was too familiar, too close to another book she had had, one that she had considered a friend.
2. And which book was that?
Lily Evans, Class of 77’.
3. Pointing out how brilliant I am…..figuring out that year from my own knowledge <3.
Thou art foundeth a great find. Ye readeth what I expect for most of ye is a most olde document, and that fact exhilirateth me. Thine eyes have layeth upon what I expect will be a magical marvel.
4. Yay olde English! Thine eyes…..hehe.
As she walked quickly back to her desk, she saw that Luna’s mouth had curled into a small frown, and that Dean was now smiling at her, his gaze locked on her mahogany orbs. Maybe it had been the distance that had detracted his gaze. A trick of the light.
5. Where was Dean looking? And what might Luna have been thinking?
His constants “are you ok? Are you ok?” ‘s got rather annoying, and quickly.
6. This is a direct reference to my own life, so I don’t expect most of you to get it. Maybe Mouse. It was rather pleasing to write though.
Still, something about the walk down the lake towards the hut that held her friend was cold, and distant. In fact, something about Hogwarts felt separate, as though Ginny truly didn’t belong there, she belonged somewhere else.
7. Why do you think Ginny feels so different and separate from Hogwarts? (this is just for me to make sure I am conveying the correct feelings)
Here at last was someone who understood her, who had loved…him…as much as she had, and who was one of her oldest and dearest friends.
8. “..him..” being?
9. Why do you think Ginny calls Voldy Riddle? (that should be fairly obvious, as well as showing…)
10. Now Ginny was really confused, for Hagrid’s words of comfort held some double meaning to her. They seemed to be layered in something cryptic, something she couldn’t really understand, but vowed she was going to.
a. cryptic? What might Hagrid be referring too? What does Hagrid know? 11. “Stags.” a. What importance is a stag in Harry Potter? Why does Ginny almost force herself to do it, and why does she do it anyway? b. ^this was one of my latent ideas, that mildly changed the plotline, nothing major though. The main plot has remained untouched. I’ve merely added some things in, and I expect this story will continue to surprise me. I hope so anyways. c. Magical creatures paraded through her mind, but nothing seemed to fit, until one stopped halfway through, the hoofs beating into her brain. <-- I loved describing that! 12. Relief was the first one she discerned, followed instantly by rage, burrowing from her underbelly, eating at her as she stood there. Questions instantly clouded her brain, as though trying to shove thoughts in her head, and to justify responses. The thoughts shoved each other out of the way, pushing and crowding there way into her brain, making it impossible for her to focus, and a headache was quick forthcoming for the rap being played against the building was drilling a tiny hole in her head. a. alright, now you have to admit that was pretty good description. It took about twenty minutes until I was happy with it. Anyways…questions… b. Why is Ginny relieved, and then enraged? c. Who is the owl (will be answered first paragraph next chapter) ?
13. What possible significance is the rose? Note the title of the story. 14. Again, I draw you to the end of the chapter one. Now that you know where the rose was going, any clues as to the person who sent it, aka, the two boys who were fighting?
Alright, I think that is enough to be getting along with. I am hard at work on Chapter three, and this has got to be one of my favorite chapters to write because it’s not in….well I’ll let you read it. Chapters Three…14/15 and the ending ones…they seem to be my favorite outlines, and will translate into the best chapters I think. Did it show at all that this was probably my least favorite outline, barring the ending? I found it hard to get it started, but once I did, I was good to go. So let me know <3.
Mighty Grammer Queen, I bow down before your incredible power and humbly ask you to edit this as you did before …..
As I said before, I love reading theories, so say if someone was to fill out these questions in any way shape or form, I might be more motivated to update <3
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Post by Weirdo/ Taki on Oct 9, 2006 16:40:12 GMT -5
It would be my greatest pleasure, O All Powerful Admin. Did you get the others that I edited? Anyway... to answer your questions: 1. No idea 2. Riddle's diary, of course! 3. You're quite brilliant. A regular genious! 4. Blech. But fun. 5. Ginny has a really big nose and Luna has a crush on Dean. Just kidding! Maybe Dean was spacing out? 6. You're small so people think you're delicate. I know you're quite undelicate though. 7. No Harry, Ron, or Hermione. The war changed her. She doesn't feel like she belongs there anymore. 8. duh, Harry 9. Her first encounter with him was as him being Riddle. She's trying to remember that? Or prove to herself that she's over it? 10. Maybe he knows where Harry is? 11a. The stag was Harry's patronus, and she's still in love with him, etc. 11b. Exciting. 11c. It sounds very cool. 12a. Amazing description. 12b. She's relieved because she thinks it means Harry's alive then enraged because he didn't let her know earlier and he didn't try to contact her at all. 12c. Hedwig. 13. Harry's telling Ginny he's still alive and he still loves her?? 14. I think it was Harry.
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Post by Mickey on Oct 9, 2006 20:51:53 GMT -5
*evil laugh*
You were right on several accounts, and wrong in the exact way I want you to be in others, yay!!!!!! Wahoo!!
So what were your thoughts on the chapter? I mean without the theories and stuff. And yep, I got the editted versions of the others thanks soooo much! It was awesome, thank you thank you thank you.....
And I've been a tad rejected for chapter number one for a stupid formatting issue, but it'll be up soon. I still can't believe I'm PUBLISHED!
And hey you guys, you can write fan fics too, or with me if you want!!! Any ideas?
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Post by Mickey on Oct 10, 2006 7:04:41 GMT -5
oh by the way, the more times you access my hpff page, the more my story has been "read" and then I can be like "over 1,000 reads!!!!" and then more people will want to read it, because they will be like "wow...a 1,000 reads?" hehehe.... so...
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Post by Weirdo/ Taki on Oct 10, 2006 20:37:14 GMT -5
Your story is amazing. I'm sorry I haven't gotten around to editing yet, XC, homework, school, puppy, and trying to eat, sleep, and shower somewhere in here.
Can't wait for the next installment!!!!
And what's your link for the story?
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Post by Mickey on Oct 11, 2006 10:49:50 GMT -5
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Post by Weirdo/ Taki on Oct 11, 2006 19:58:39 GMT -5
I reviewed it. It wasn't a good review, but I sitll get credit, right??? lol
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Post by Mickey on Oct 12, 2006 6:45:04 GMT -5
yesyes!!!!! thank you!
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Post by Mickey on Oct 12, 2006 6:47:49 GMT -5
zomg, lumi you were read number 123!!!!!! so who's gonna be my lucky 124? I should give them a reward....hehe
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Post by naturepenny on Oct 13, 2006 17:13:07 GMT -5
ok did u review yourself or am i losing it? but it's soooooo cool that your published!
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Post by Mickey on Oct 13, 2006 21:44:08 GMT -5
haha, while the question of you losing it might be up for grabs, i did review it myself as Balance once, just to jupstart my reads.
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