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Post by Mickey on Sept 5, 2006 21:40:01 GMT -5
Please post your reviews of the story "But for a Single Rose" in here! Also, when "But for a Single Rose" is accepted on HPFF I will provide a link so you can read it and print it (if you so choose) easier.
Also- please remember that at this point and time, "But for a Single Rose" is merely a short prologue, a whole story is in mind and in progress!
-------Mickey
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Post by Weirdo/ Taki on Sept 7, 2006 20:41:24 GMT -5
That's really good!
Percy died? I don't remember that. You were referring to Percy, right? I read HBP 2 summers ago, so I don't remember much.
I really liked that. The description was great, and I liked the story. I can't wait till you work on it some more!
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Post by Mickey on Sept 7, 2006 20:53:24 GMT -5
hehe, well Percy died in the Last Battle- which hasn't actually happened in the real books yet. I didn't like him, so I killed him off-lol <3. I actually have quite a bit of the story worked out in outline format(all the chapters are titled, and the main points, even some random dialogue that will probably all change) lol, and almost all of Chapter One- so it shouldn't be toooo too long. Lol.  oh and um, what did you think of the chapter's opening picture? It's the picture Ginny throws. See- cause its shattered and in the picture ginny has "wrapped her arms around the picture harry as he stroked her silky red hair and smiled"  Oh mighty Grammer Queen, would you perhaps be humble enough as to edit it a bit? -blinks innocently- And thanks! |
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Post by Weirdo/ Taki on Sept 8, 2006 20:31:34 GMT -5
Ok. Yeah, Percy's a *****. Will he actually die or is that just spectulation? How did you find that picture? Did you edit 2 pics together? Cuz it's cool and I like it. (But Harry doesn't have glasses in the pic.....)
It would be my greatest pleasure, Oh Powerful Head Admin. Did you want me to edit right in your post?
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Post by Mickey on Sept 9, 2006 12:36:34 GMT -5
Yep, you will eventually see Percy die in a flashback along with a crapload of unimportant people that i deemed dead. The only people that I was sad about killing off were Dennis Creevey & Seamus Finnigan. I needed some students to die obviously, and i was like "can't be Dean, or the Patil Twins cause I already said there alive ( and have a minor role) can't be luna, or neville (he WAS gonna but James almost throttled me...) ...crap. That leaves Seamus. As for Dennis I figured it was really sad but...well...soooo Voldy. Oh, and if you are wondering why I told you that, it's cause it bears no interest to the storyline, its just background info . And yes, I editted those pics together, aren't they tres' manufique??? Hehe. I soo spelled THAT wrong. That would be my hundred dollar awesome graphics studio. I want to see if I can get one of those things that you hook to the computer, and draw on and then what your drawing appears on the monitor? But I have no idea what they are called and they are probably tres' expensive...hehe. As for the glasses, i know, all the ones of him with glasses were A. Promo shots that had him in the complete wrong position, and B. from the movie and he wasn't old enough looking. It came out nicely, don't you think? Mighty Grammer Queen that would be lovely, though I don't think it is possible due to my Powerful Head Admin status. Therefore, why don't you copy it into a word document, edit it, and then pm the copy to me and i will replace the post with the editted copy. |
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Post by kal on Sept 9, 2006 17:10:28 GMT -5
I dont get the end of chapter 2...but other than that great story!
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Post by Mickey on Sept 10, 2006 11:07:31 GMT -5
You don't know how glad I am to hear you say that Kal! Which is evil I know, , but the truth--cause you aren't supposed to get it, save for some minor minor things that will form utterly wrong conclusions(if i did it right), and you won't get the answers until(checks fourteen page outline of story)....chapter 17/18 ish.... hehe. |
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Post by kal on Sept 11, 2006 16:18:32 GMT -5
O YOU ARE EVIL!
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Post by Mickey on Sept 12, 2006 8:38:22 GMT -5
Proud of it <3. And this isn't even the chapter with the biggest cliff hanger <3....
so theorize! Tell me who you think they are, what it means, and is harry dead... that kinda thing! (....i love theories....hinthint- i might update faster if i get to read sommmme <3)
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Post by kal on Sept 21, 2006 18:39:36 GMT -5
ok ok heres a theory. Harry is dead. But REALLY he is ALIVE!!! lol now update..
ok heres my reall theory: harry is dead on the inside cos everything he knew died. or went missing. or started hating him. or started throwing pics of them together against walls. you know...
now update.
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Post by Mickey on Sept 25, 2006 11:56:47 GMT -5
Kal. That is not a theory. A theory would more likely be: "Dumbledore isn't dead because Snape only pretended to kill him and it was a conspiracy" hehe. Anyways- Well, The Chapter is undergoing some reworkings but should be up by...alright i'll set a date that i'll most likely blow by but will try to publish it by.... how about... the first of october. also... I have BIG NEWS!!!! My story was accepted at HPFF!!!! (harrypotterfanfiction.com) I'm PUBLISHED!!! WAHOO!!!! You may all revel in my glory here: www.harrypotterfanfiction.com/viewstory.php?psid=197051^^ a note about that....the prologue was validated, and I'm submitting chapter one as we speak, but they have accepted my story so it should be validated shortly. So not all of what I have written is up. I feel so loved.... hehe... |
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Post by Weirdo/ Taki on Sept 30, 2006 11:54:45 GMT -5
You are very loved.
That was incredible!!!!!!
I can't wait for the next installment!
And I'm going to start editing..... now!
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kal To lazy to login
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Post by kal To lazy to login on Sept 30, 2006 21:50:05 GMT -5
ooo it will be posted tommorow! and tommorow is 5 DAYS AWAY FROM MY BIRTHDAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and i hafta serve...ack...
OK HEre is my theroy that isnt stupid:
its the same thing but i made it intellegent
Harry gave up all of his will of life because so many people were against him. Mentally he is dead. And physically he is healthy. Then Ginny will find him. ALl will be forgevin. And he will come back to life mentally.
^^ IS that a theory?
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Post by Weirdo/ Taki on Oct 1, 2006 19:13:29 GMT -5
Oooo! J'aime that theory!!!!!
I was gonna say that Harry locked himself up in his own brain, which is pretty much the same thing as what Kal who was too lazy to log in was saying.
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Post by Mickey on Oct 4, 2006 7:27:22 GMT -5
cool cool.....i promise the update is coming...i'm working at every free moment..see i got this idea that dramatically improved the length but as i have hoomecoming this week i'm a bit preoccupied...not to mention one of my gigundo history tests today you guys should have a lot more to theorize on shortly, as the mystery of part of the rose is revealed in the next chappy<3. in the meantime, i will post some questions for theories purposes... 1. if Harry is not physically dead, where is he? and why didn't he tell Ginny? 2. Do you think Ginny would be happy/angry/relieved/shocked (etc.) if she was to discover Harry was alive?If she was angry, how would she retaliate? 3. What does the password to the Heads Dorm stand for? 4. Who were the two boys at the end of chapter one? 5. What did "the companion" mean when he said "your dead to her, and not just physically?' (you might have picked up on this one) 6. what happened in the final battle? (you will get a flashback eventually to explain this, though there are loads of references through out the story so that by the end you'd probably be able to figure it out without the flashback) 7. why is ginny so mad at harry? (that one should be able to be answered, and if isn't then it will be in the next chapter) ...thats all I can think of. Hehe, it gave me an idea though. From now on, I'lll post questions about the chapter, so i can pull your attention to my clues for threorizing, or maybe something that i researched for a symbol and want it pointed out how brilliant i am. However be careful, I'll probably post questions directly pulling you AWAY from the clues, as well as pointing you TOWARDS the clues (i have done so once in this post already, though it won't seem like it at first)... +.:.:.:....mWhAhaHahAhahAhaHahAhaHahAhaHahAhaHahAhaHahA....:.:.:...+ ^^^since i have a horrible evil laugh, pretend i played to recording i have of Taki's evil laugh.... hehe.^ |
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